And, this is why...

...my book is the never-ending story.  I've changed bits in the excerpt posted yesterday FIVE times since I got up this morning.  Yes.  That's right.  Five times.  It was worth it, though.  It flows better, and is more succinct.  The worrying thing?  Five rewrites for an excerpt...how long for the whole flaming book??  I hope I live long enough to finish it.